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Jim C. Hines on writing about rape in fiction

I highly recommend this essay by Jim C. Hines, just published over at Apex, about the perils and pitfalls writers may encounter if they choose to write about rape and other sexual violence in their fiction. It’s a thoughtful piece (not surprising given his experience as a rape counselor) and he dismantles a lot of tired old tropes, clichés, and myths about rape along the way.

He isn’t the first person to point this out–see also Karen Healey’s posts on her blog, Girls Read Comics and They’re Pissed, for a similar discussion about comics. I think his essay makes a useful contribution because it offers writers some ideas about how to write about sexual violence in a way that does not diminish, belittle, or sensationalize the experiences of those who have been through it. He also advises writers to stop and think about whether they are using rape as a shorthand plot device, to show how evil an antagonist is, or as a one-note motivation for a character (rape victim turns vigilante, for example).

You can find out more about Hines and his work here: www.jimchines.com

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Na No Revise Mo

Nov 01 2010 Published by under editing and revising, productivity

Some friends and acquaintances have asked me whether I plan to do NaNoWriMo this month, and I responded with horror, “Then I’ll have TWO novels in the revision process.” That way lies madness (for me, for now, anyway). So I’m declaring November my personal National Novel Revising Month instead. Continue Reading »

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Whew!

Aug 23 2010 Published by under editing and revising

I’ve finally finished the new ending of the novel in progress. Yay! Now to go back to the beginning and start cranking through various rounds of revisions. The new ending came about as part of a revision on the story/plot level. Now that the story is (I hope) solid, I can focus on making the characters and locations more vivid and interesting, as well as ratcheting up the dramatic conflict a bit more.

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wisdom of the controlled burn

I’m back at work today and there to greet me is a shiny new operating system on my work computer. In some ways it’s a lost day, since I have to install and configure a bunch of widgets, get all my devices talking to one another again, et cetera, et cetera.

On the plus side, getting a new operating system has also forced me to degunkify my desktop, which also serves to clear my head via a process of sympathetic magic. Being gone for seven workdays (eleven calendar days!)* has also helped with the head-clearing. And now I get to learn some new computery stuff about the operating system and new versions of various software tools I use for work (Windows 7 and Adobe CS5). Continue Reading »

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thank you, Twitter

Mar 20 2009 Published by under book review, editing and revising, general

Remember when Blaise Pascal wrote, “I made this letter longer than usual because I lack the time to make it shorter”?

(That was in 1656 so I’m using “remember” a bit loosely, since none of us was there. Anyway.)

Twitter provides a needed corrective for the expansive nature of electronic communications. When you are printing a book, a newsletter, or a brochure, fairly quickly you get to the point of paring down content, condensing, and providing only the most valuable information, in order to save on printing costs (if nothing else).

On the web, you can bloviate nearly infinitely, although if you do, your communications will fail because people’s attention spans and patience are both limited.

The discipline of saying something of substance in 140 characters is the same discipline you using paring down a line or a stanza in a poem, where compression is a critical skill — and it often happens in the rewriting, not the drafting. It’s also a critical skill in prose, but one that tends to get short shrift. When we find a prose writer who can do it well, we tend to call them “lyrical” as a nod to that poetic skill; Amy Hempel is a good example — if you think of others, add ‘em in the comments.

p.s. – you can follow me on twitter here: http://twitter.com/skanning

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