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Jim C. Hines on writing about rape in fiction

I highly recommend this essay by Jim C. Hines, just published over at Apex, about the perils and pitfalls writers may encounter if they choose to write about rape and other sexual violence in their fiction. It’s a thoughtful piece (not surprising given his experience as a rape counselor) and he dismantles a lot of tired old tropes, clichés, and myths about rape along the way.

He isn’t the first person to point this out–see also Karen Healey’s posts on her blog, Girls Read Comics and They’re Pissed, for a similar discussion about comics. I think his essay makes a useful contribution because it offers writers some ideas about how to write about sexual violence in a way that does not diminish, belittle, or sensationalize the experiences of those who have been through it. He also advises writers to stop and think about whether they are using rape as a shorthand plot device, to show how evil an antagonist is, or as a one-note motivation for a character (rape victim turns vigilante, for example).

You can find out more about Hines and his work here: www.jimchines.com

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characters and emotion: a short bibliography

Jul 30 2010 Published by under book review, character development, revision

I’ve been struggling with a problem that I think is probably pretty common for writers: getting the emotions of a point of view (POV) character across in a way that is vivid and engaging yet not hokey or too “on the nose.” Of course my first impulse was to look around to see what other writers have to say, and I found some useful resources, which I’m happy to share with you. Continue Reading »

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review: black blade blues

Jun 30 2010 Published by under book review, character development, reading

Black Blade Blues

I just read Black Blade Blues, the debut urban fantasy novel by J. A. Pitts and first of a series of three from Tor, and it was a LOT of fun. The the book features left-handed lesbian blacksmith and martial arts expert Sarah Beauhall, who

  • inadvertently reforges a magic sword,
  • befriends a six-foot tall dwarf (the supernatural kind, not one of the Little People),
  • works out some issues of internalized homophobia with the help of her equally kick-ass girlfriend Kate, and
  • fights dragons, ogres and trolls to saves the world (naturlich) with the help of various friends from the Society for Creative Anachronism (SCA).

Not necessarily in that order. Also, at one point she gets hit on by a Valkyrie (squee!). Continue Reading »

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writer’s bookshelf: the tough guide to fantasyland

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Up this week is The Tough Guide to Fantasyland by Diana Wynne Jones. This book has been around since 1996 (first publised in the UK, now available from Penguin the US through their Firebird imprint) and has been justly lauded and reviewed LOTS of places, so I’ll be brief.

The Guide is arranged as an A-Z listing of anything and everything a Tourist (i.e., a reader of fantasy fiction) will likely encounter on their Tour of Fantasyland (i.e., reading any fantasy book). Also included are many editorial asides about things one might logically expect to find in Fantasyland but won’t, notably chilblains, the common cold, vast swathes of flora and fauna in the natural world, a viable economy, and any food except stew and on occasion yogurt.

The Guide is very, very funny; Jones has a dry, breezy, highly irreverent style that makes reading an A-Z listing, a task usually as exciting as watching paint dry, highly entertaining. The cross-references in particular are often a hoot.

Many writers swear by this book as a means of gently mocking all the clichés of the genre, thereby, we hope, discouraging them in future works, including our own. I suspect it’s most useful as a reminder about the importance of world-building (see especially the entries on ECOLOGY and ECONOMY).

In this summer’s novel-writing workshop, (World Fantasy Award-winning writer) Kij Johnson talked about the technique of “borrowed landscape,” a term she used for writing that alludes to some other cultural referent to help flesh out setting. “Chick lit” writers sometimes do this by name-dropping various products or designer’s names (The Devil Wears Prada); just about everybody writing in a contemporary setting uses this to some extent or the other by using pop culture references.

In fantasy fiction, the borrowed landscape might use elements of other fantasy works (Tolkien?) or folklore. The danger is in over-reliance on borrowed landscape, and on everybody picking the same few details to evoke the rest of the world they describe (which is why the animal and plant kingdoms in Fantasyland are greatly reduced compared to real life). In this way, the Guide serves as a reminder to choose those evocative details carefully. Plus it’s a lot of fun.

On a related note, I picked up my copy of the Tough Guide at a wonderful kid’s bookstore in Kansas City, The Reading Reptile, which has an amazing selection, from board books through young adult, in a kid-friendly environment. It was my first visit, but I’ll be back. They also sponsor a big children’s lit fest every year. Their lineup for 2010 (March 26-27)  includes Adam Rex, who wrote the wonderful and super-fun book The True Meaning of Smekday.

Oh, and another thing: special thanks to Rob and Lane for reciting the entire entry on STEW nearly verbatim from memory last Wednesday, reminding me that I really really needed to get this book.

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Just for fun (or if you’re really stuck): the Fantasy Name Generator

May 18 2009 Published by under character development

If you are really, truly, very bad at naming characters, and you write fantasy fiction, here at last is help: the Fantasy Name Generator.

I wish I could think of the author who did this, but I was reading about someone (whose writing I respect and whose invented names generally went well with her characters – that much I can remember) who looked around at her bookshelves and took random syllables from the names of the authors on the spines and mashed them together. (Maybe it was Laurie J. Marks of the Earth Logic series?)

If you know, Dear Reader, please aid my recollection. (And if you have any other wonderful tricks for naming characters, please share them!)

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